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Have you ever felt that moment where you had what you wanted,
You had the love the wealth and you was living this glorious moment,
Got you smiling and laughing and feeling like a little kid,
Not even caring about the things that you once did,
Just living your life in a wonderful world,
Thinking about your future getting kids having a young boy or girl,
Until you open your eyes and realize it was just a dream,
Having you reaching back and trying to redeem,
Now all you doing is sitting and watching the world pass you by,
Just waiting for your time to die,
As everything you once tried to forget,
Keeps running through your mind as you try to get your life set,
Got you feeling so weak,
That you just can't sleep,
Got you feeling so strong,
That everything just feels wrong,
And now you crying but no tears r falling,
Now you yelling but no sound is flowing,
You start running but nowhere your going,
You start falling but there's nowhere for landing,
You start praying but no one is listening,
So you don't stop dreaming even if this is reality that's hitting
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Dreaming of a better day...
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Mood: Amazed ~Kaiba-Girl-Maliko Jan 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... That sounds pretty sad. But I think everyone's had one of those days that they just want to go back to sleep and dream that their reality wasnt so real...
Good job, though! *Faves*
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thanks i try to connect with what people actually go thro when i write my poems
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Mood: Joy ~Kaiba-Girl-Maliko Jan 21, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, you're doing a good job!
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